#GIVE ME THE LORE VIVIENNE
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Thinking about how the second Lucifer set foot in the hotel, Alastor immediately was filled to the brim with contempt towards him. We know it's because he can't tolerate not being the most powerful being in the room and just had to find a way to antagonize him, but you know what else is there? Everyone in the hotel knows at that point that Lucifer has been an absent father for some time.
Now what is the most common theory about Alastor's own father?
#i really want to get more info on his home life. it would explain so much about him#but i keep thinking he got to hell and saw the place in disarray under the rule of an--to him--incompetent ruler#and maybe he wants to reach the top to set everything under a semblance of control?#if alastor had an absent father himself it's v likely he was put in the position of âman of the houseâ at a young age#and grew up expecting to always take charge of things and to take matters into his own hands#the serial killing could stem from that if we assume he only killed abusive men as i've seen mentioned in some other hcs#as if he's got a misguided sense of heroism that is so complex and convoluted it does a full 180 and lands smack dab in villainy#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel alastor#GIVE ME THE LORE VIVIENNE#idk he just. is so clearly evil yet genuinely wants to help the hotel. idk what he's thinking it drives me nuts
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sometimes⌠lore that is conflicting⌠is worldbuilding
#da fandom single issue voters be like#âthey forgot their own loreâ#âtheyâre trying to convince us all sides are equally badâ#because not every mage you meet is a card-carrying abolitionist#and not every templar you meet is a fire-breathing bloodthirsty monster#and not all elves are best friends#and sometimes religious people are nice to you#and donât get me started on qunari#listen there are definite lore misses but when yâall say âinconsistencyâ#i just hear waaa give me back my broad brush#and âI donât believe x character would ever-â#means âI only like the version of them I made up in my headâ#if you genuinely enjoy being outraged all the time by all means keep throwing your fits#but vivienne is correct about a lot of things and im tired of pretending sheâs not
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dai mod list
people requested a list of the mods i use!! i exclusively use frosty mod manager so everything is a frosty mod or a dai mod that works fine through frosty. these are for general use so let me know if thereâs anything youâve seen me using for a specific inquisitor or smth that you want to find!
the fundamentals
hair retexture
brown-friendly eye texture tweaks
nullify fall damage frosty
party banter tweaks
easier to read font mod for dai (averia serif libre)
no more paraphrasing
no dirt buildup
party at the winter palace
no more grave desecration
darth parametricâs inquisitor leather armour pads for frosty
advisors & companions
cullen complexion converted to frosty in the optional files of apomorphâs miscellany
cullen from cullen dorian tousled hair
lady josephine outfit retextures
josie deshine from npc subtle tweaks
josephine - true dark brown hair
leliana - the nightingaleâs song (hair)
the left hand of the divine for frosty
fashionably divine
blackwall - unequipped outfit best used in conjunction with the dark retexture from casual ferelden (NOTE - turn this off for his personal quest appearance in val royeaux and if you plan to take him to in hushed whispers, or he will appear without a body in some scenes)
blackwall complexion edit
blackout hairstyle for blackwall from anto hairstyles
warden of orlais - blackwall remade (the âONLY beardâ optional file
solas complexion tweaks
vivienne complexion tweak from elliseâs companion complexions edited
chloeâs frosty conversions - elviciâs dorian in the rough
customising the inquisitor
misc hairstyles for frosty
tropeliciousâ eyebrow mods
stubble pack
isabela hair and piercings for all has many more piercing options than the name would imply
prologue outfit: immersive starting armours or pilgrimâs coat or carta coat or the no starter optional file from here to use ur skyhold outfit
skyhold outfit: obviously very down to you and your inquisitorâs personal taste, but dwarven skyhold outfit retextures and elf pajama replacers and ferelden noble dress for all fem have been good to me
formal outfits: inquisition finery or champagne and truffles or inquisition charming (the latter is not a retexture and affects more outfits so can be difficult, for example i couldnât manage to keep this for the others and give the inquisitor a dress)
other npcs
lore-friendly fiona and briala
brialaâs banished bun backing
briala tarot card from briala (frosty)
imperial florianne (calperniaâs hair version)
golden mask for empress celene
the chasind shapeshifter - morrigan retexture
mercurialmalcontentâs kieran options and dress recolors for frosty
alistairâs old hair
actually alistair
#modding chatter#making me realise i modded the life out of blackwall. those built up over time i wasnt just like fuck this guy#long post
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arabella // hobie brown x reader (one-shot)
oneshot of hobie trying to pursue a reader who's effortlessly cool and has strong arabella vibes cuz i love that vibe. inspired some on slc punk and sex pistols lore, cool fic for the music enthusiasts
New girl's hip New girl's cool New girl's interesting New girl's hot.
"She came straight out of 70's New L.A. She's no rockstar's girlfriend, she's a rockstar herself! Crazy hair, mysterious bassist, she's from outer space."
AO3
And when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams...
"Ay, who's the new girl?" Was the first thing Hobie asked as he nudged Pav's shoulder, not breaking his intense stare at the new recruit.Â
"New girl? Oh that's YN." Pav shifted his narrowed eyes into Hobie's, a teasing grin drawing on his face.
"Yea' but what's her full name...?"
"Go ask her yourself man, everyone calls her YN." Hobie never got her name, she refused to be called anything but those particular initials.
To say she was pretty was an understatement. She was stunning, show-stopping, alluring.Â
At least to Hobie, all adjectives were perfectly applicable.
She had this quirk, this confidence and these slight Chrissie Hynde vibes, boldness when she spoke that made her so attractive, and to top it she was a great musician.Â
Back in her dimension it was the seventies, and she was the leader of a girl band where she played the bass, doing small gigs in downtown New L.A.
She wore flamboyant black cowboy boots and scandalous skirts, with chunky sunglasses that looked like the eyes of a bug. She had crazy hair and wore Vivienne Westwood's accessories on her pierced ears and fingers before it was even cool in the US. Her dark tights were always ripped but she didn't care, she called it a fashion statement. So did she call her Spidey suit, which had a unique design that caught anyone's attention.Â
Love was for posers Hobie thought, but what's more punk than going against your own structures?
"Gwendy I gotta' talk to this girl more." Hobie's frustration was something Gwen wasn't used to seeing. His nature was often relaxed, only energic when invited to disrupt the order, but hardly ever frustrated.
"Well, you don't have to." Gwen shrugged as she tried to mask the frown that was forming in her face, but her wrinkled nose gave away her displease of jealousy.
"I know, but I want to." His attention was fixed on YN, how she moved and talked. "I wanna hear her play. You're a girl right? When you girls think a lad's fit, how much of that comes from his coolness?" He asked as he leaned on Gwen's side, resting his body weight on her. She scoffed in disbelief at the absurdity of his question, something only a man could ask.Â
"Since when do you want to conform to the arbitrary standards of women?"
"I don't, I just wanna' know how many I can get away with breaking and she can still like me yea'?" Hobie chuckled before getting up again. "Don't get too jealous on me alright?" He joked, patting his friend's shoulder as he jumped down from where they were sitting, approaching her once again.
"He's never gonna give up is he?" Miles sat once again close beside Gwen, who sighed at the sight of Hobie attempting to come off as nonchalant with a girl who only seemed to curve his insinuations over and over.Â
"That's such a man thing to do, no offense." Gwen spat as her hand slid down her face, pointing at what she could only describe as a humilliation show.
"Yeah... right."Â
It's not that she didn't notice, she just dodged him. She thought there was more important things to do than let herself be conquered by some co-worker. But she was lying if she said he wasn't winning her over.
He also was so her type.
The funky hair, the spikes on his leather vest, the stickers and carvings on his guitar, his Iggy Pop vibes and his weird slang. But he thought he was so it, he was a nice guy but he needed some humbling. Their first conversation was about Bowie, and he played her a bit of Moonage Daydream as she recalled when she saw him live, getting all starry eyed whenever she'd narrate the part where she gave him a ride in her car.
"You gave Bowie a ride?"
"Spider's Tour, yeah..." She giggled, flipping her hair in a way that had him starstruck. "In my mom's car."
"In your mum's car? Oh get out." She went on to talk about how that changed her view on music, going on about her gigs in New L.A and how she moved there to make it big.Â
Hobie was sure he was listening, but as much as he tried to contain himself, keeping in comments was not in his book.
"You always dress this mad? Like, all the time?" He bursted out with a smile, cutting her off. They were sitting on a counter table, with his guitar on his lap. He leaned closer to pick on the fabric of her coat.Â
"Always. Do you always dress so pretentious?" She retorted with a smug grin, pushing her hair out of her face. His eyes shot up to look at her, puzzled. "I mean, aren't you like... rebelling against society?" Hobie let out a slight laugh, his head tilting in interest as he looked into her eyes.Â
"Well, yea'. Why?"
"Don't you think it would be more of an act of rebellion if you didn't spend so much time buying stickers and pins and going out to get punky clothes? Stop me if I'm being offensive, I think the style's hip, but it just seems counterproductive to your cause."
"Na' its cool, keep going." He struggled to discern if he was actually listening, or simply invested in watching her mouth smart words as her long painted nails tapped on the counter.
"You want to be an individual, but it's like you wear a uniform. It's just punk fashion, not rebellion." Hobie's eyes fixated on her's, leaving a strong silence as she ended her phrase.Â
"I'm not judging you, just kind of a general critique to what they call punk movement."
Hobie brushed her off with his usual humorous comments to maintain his pride, but he was dazzled. Even if she had criticized his way of thinking and how he dressed, she was so outspoken, without caring what he had to say or thought about her opinion, and he was crazy for his first impression of her, as much as he hated to admit it as he'd call 'Love is for posers'. Hobie was sure he was just trying to win her over, to prove a point he'd say, but deep down he loved the way she smiled and shook her head whimsically everytime he'd say something or take time off his schedule to nag her.
It was a few times that she gave Hobie the chance to play with her, to which she soon learnt that he did not know how to read tabs. Of course the punk kid is self-taught. Trying to lead, they would play messy numbers and solos. It was ocasionally just her and Gwen, who had let YN grown onto her sharing her love for girl bands, doing some jamming with their instruments as Hobie payed vague attention. But he would pound on any chance to be alone with her and try to take her out.
She didn't know what was in her that day, but she let him take her out.
He toured her around his universe, before taking her to what he called "his palace".Â
The small canal boat was ridiculously a very Hobie place to live. If she were to guess, she'd think he lived in a tree somewhere in Birmingham. However it had it's charm, it was very humid and it wobbled when they walked, but it was unique and she loved it. Hobie showed her the collection of things he had stolen, proving himself to be a brilliant thief. He owed most of his 'talent' to his Spider-Sense and speed, but he'd never bring it up.Â
As she sat on the mattress where he slept in, Hobie picked up one of his records, sitting beside her to show her the signed insides of the vinyl. Her eyes paced from the inscriptions to his face, as he ocasionally caught a glimpse of her through the corner of his eye. He left the vinyl aside to go on about his encounters with the infuential musicians on the area, how he attempted to steal the microphone the Bowie of his dimension had used when he was touring in his city. Her gaze shifting from his eyes to his lips back and forth.Â
He was hesitant about making a move, afraid he'd mess up what had taken him so much work. But wasn't even given time to think it through before the proximity between them grew, and her hand softly caressed his bony cheek and down to his neck, inviting him to lean into a kiss. As they made out, his cold piercing was quickly warmed by her damp tongue and soft lips that sucked and kissed his. His hands caressed up and down her waist, undoing the buttons on her blouse with his slender fingers as she revealed her naked torso, no bra underneath. YN did her usual hair flip to watch him undress her, and himself, jumping on her once finished to continue what he had briefly interrupted.
"We won't sink, will we?" She asked between soft giggles as the boat quivered at his abrupt movement, Hobie nibbling down her neck and kissing her chest.Â
"I wank pretty crazy here every night, we won't." He teased before crawling backwards, kissing down her navel.Â
songs i listened to while working on this:
(ofc) arabella - arctic monkeys
moonage daydream, lady grinning soul and starman - bowie
hey, velouria - pixies
rhiannon, gold dust woman - fleetwood mac
#across the spiderverse#spiderman across the spiderverse#spiderman: across the spiderverse#spiderman: atsv#hobie brown#hobie atsv#hobie brown atsv#spiderpunk#spider punk#spiderpunk fanfic#spider punk fanfic#hobie brown fanfiction#hobie x reader#hobie brown x reader#hobie brown x y/n#hobie brown x yn#hobie brown x you#hobie brown x oc#spider punk x reader#spiderpunk x reader#Spotify
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Pretty good article by Lauren Morton - it articulates the lackluster character writing in Veilguard quite well. She brings up some of the in-universe debates of past games for comparison, and I think it really encapsulates what is missing from Veilguard:
âI really miss some of the touchstone debates of past Dragon Age games. Fenris and Anders in Dragon Age 2 are both messy loose canons who resent one another and disapprove of Hawke's leaning too far for or against the rights of mages in Kirkwall. Origins gives its hero the awful choice of what to do with a child who's been possessed by a demon, and Alistair is livid if you choose to handle it in a certain way, culminating in a steep disapproval hit. I even enjoy Vivienne in Inquisition, hotly debated as she is, for effectively being a scab who believes her fellow mages should be relegated to the Circle towers. Those are just a small sample of the ways that Dragon Age heroes have wrestled against the morals of their party in the past.
â[âŚ] By the end, Rook's companions are all pretty much goodie two-shoes characters with uncomplicated beliefs. There's a ton of groundwork to each character that could have made them morally complex and interesting but, frustratingly, that all goes unrealized.â
I guess I wouldnât be so hard on Veilguard if I didnât have the far more compelling writing of the previous games to compare it to - its writing is pretty mediocre in my estimation, but Iâve seen worse. But the main thing I liked about Dragon Age was the character writing and the sociopolitically complicated lore, and both have been extremely minimized (and sanitized) in DATV to the point where itâs deeply boring.
The only thing that feels consistent with the Dragon Age Experience is that the gameplay still kinda sucks. So uh, that doesnât help much.
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The Dana Terrace Vs Vivienne Medrano, The Great Debate of Two Female Creators
Hello Starry Knights, This is the lovely Kyoko Cane, The Brown Sugah Queen, & cosplayer who performs and visits numerous cons throughout, while making blogs/vlogs on animated media & entertainment.
as you know or are new to this page, I am an artist who also dedicated my fashion in drag, on all my platforms along my artwork & discussions (be it anime or Western) that can affect real-life even fandoms, with a variety of videos.
the title of the post is about The two proclaimed talked about animators, Dana Terrace & Vivienne Medrano, I'll be critiquing how these two women of animation tackle the industry. This will have strong opinions from recent interview videos I've watched.
(I'll be calling Vivienne VIVI FOR SHORT & letting you know, if I were to watch ones in the future affecting my post come on the comments to ask freely, AND YES ALL PROJECTS AND TOPICS ARE NOT WITHOUT THEIR CRITIQUES, FLAWS IF YOU CAN'T HANDLE IT, CHECK OUT THE DAYSTAR VOYAGE, DON'T HATE, APPRECIATE! )
OK LETS GET STARTED In this 3-part segment
1. The Different Artstyles That Made Us Love These Shows.
Vivis work (Helluva Boss & Hazbin Hotel)
Now We all know as fans & lovers of animation when we hear a series that's greenlit after viewing on a television screen, in a magazine, or sponsored in commercials, right? As for these two,
The first time I heard of VIVI's work was on a YouTube ad commercial in line & premiered for the pilot, I was fully captivated by its groundbreaking story, from hazbin hotel to the comedy in helluva boss, along with its ghoulish Beetlejuice-inspired art style.
(which I'm a sucker for the niche, indie projects & gothic horror.)
observing her sketchbook on YouTube, I was drawn in by the captivated humanoid shapes she sketches, along with her fluid & flowing style.
the worldbuilding version of heaven & hell drew me in, after watching hazbin hotel. The pilot had a lot to offer from its dreary horrific turns/obstacles from its character debut, story & distorted beauty that there was a lot to tune Into along my first episode of Helluva Boss,
Now we are gonna get down to lore storytelling and character growth.
(and im fully aware of how the fandom treats the rest of the main & supporting cast not letting them flesh out including the females, btw)
Vivi has so much to offer, after watching the latest episode of Helluva Boss and finishing Hazbin Hotel, I see she has the potential to make a good show on drama & sell it, however with her controversy coming through I feel she needs to learn on how to perceive herself online, so makes it hard for me not to hate her series, be it art and her work.
(its truly good when it wants to be as for the writing ima get to that later. with the stolitz & lumity discourse on part 2)
The owl House by Dana terrace
Now you all know by now, I am a full-on Owl House fan regardless of its show ending early, and my many critics on Dana Terrace drew me in with her macabre art and full-on passionate skeletal pieces after looking at her socials and sketchbook online, as a debut showrunner who made her great stance on lgbt representation she has cemented herself as an acclaimed cartoon creator.
However, she does have her flaws ever since rewatching the series, and a lot to learn about the business, after rewatching The Show and yes I have notes written to prove them,
To add I felt if alex Hirsch wasn't on the project, everyone wouldn't watch that show since yall want it to be the next GRAVITY FALLS,
I love the fandoms that discuss the errors of these creators cause it gives more insight on how to portray yourselves on in the real world, cause lemme tell you, it was all watered down I'm get to that in a minute
one problem i have with particularly since she's a good artist & creator is her depending on certain tropes to carry out her cast, cause some may be harmful, along tropes being flanderized & the writing of character being generic & stereotyped.
She needs work on being a better showrunner cause those skills need Cleaning up including writing certain characters on who gets the spotlight.
NEXT SEGMENT
2. The Good, Great, Bad & Ugly in Fandom Discourse,
Vivis Work (Wow Yall can be Wow)
Vivienne Has made her mark in the YouTube market ever since making her pilot debut on Kesha video & hazbin hotel pilot,
I'm so glad for her contributions towards the indie market cementing her way to showing great representation in the general audience for an adult show, not to mmention disablity rep, yes an adult show and that's not without its controversy,
with her grand debate, I feel everyone took this woman's artwork turning it into something ugly, which is so uncool.
and I for one will not stand for the hate trains of now popular shows flip-flopping and then float back to it cause your series is acclaimed now, let's be real she deserves her crowns and laurels, Just keeping it real, regardless cause its a fire show
The fandom has shown their love of the show cause it knocked down so many doors in many ways, but let's be real the audience is now geared toward children cause we all know, this generation can be doing some crazy things, the way they all need to tone down the language, and let characters breath in the show
which I feel viv needs to work on the jokes. I get, it's an adult show which is concerning and it's a Gen Z world where people have access to computers 247, which contributes to all the nasty discourse and crass behavior not to mention,
fandom needs to calm down her fans when it comes down to her work and the way stoliz is perceived.l can be questionable, not to mention how the females are written which I do know the key word for this below.
cause i rarely do find the females are compelling, but yet to fleshed out like the rest of the male characters so misogynist comes into mind in this show and how it sells
there some moments it only aims to the infamous ship Stolitz (and doesn't let other characters breathe (this is a problem with the owl house which ill get to right now cause the pacing is wow smh)
(next to the owl house which I'll get to cause OMG)
THE OWL HOUSE FANDOM (GRRRR) lemme calm down
If you haven't seen my posts, including the bashing and discourse there's also a list I swear lemme quote
in the words of Biggie Small - if you don't know now ya know.
The owl house fandom i was on ride or die for lumity. however we all know how that ship got it start and built up cause they expected it to be this thing to say (F you to Disney) which is good cause disney had its comuppence howver, after the show ended
fans have become the most foulest ugliest & disrespectful fandom ever since the Steven Universe, Voltron and miraculous incidents,
its sad to see how these two franchises fell into the worse cases, the two creators may come across not caring of there fandom acts cause there's a saying
The captain always goes down with his ship MEANING
A captain should not have to sacrifice their life or crew, simply because the vessel they are in control of is in distress
Thereâs two fandoms such as Steven universe & voltron fell from grace into toxicity down below that are prime examples
youtube
The Owl House fandom has got to be some of the most entitled, uppity if not (racist) fans!
yall clearly have not listened to other fans or can't take criticism, yes the show did make very feminist undertones and the male characters didn't shine at all in their titular episodes or moments, which doesn't help at all.
Since Dana drew inspiration from Powerpuff Girls
(which comes on and the writers being all female, might have some damaging effects)
Cause its stifled the male characters in a way where there not as prominent or impactful,
So this word MISANDRY comes to mind
The fandom has gone down to the point of no return, I mean,
one fan from a webcam interview WANTED DANA's ADDRESS EWWW! (in one disccus video0
its not that the Disney drama was too blame for the project, (to an extent) which I'm proud for the fandom for banding together on animation, but need to take off the lgbt glasses, cause boy the show's writing was pushed in favor of that.
CONGRATS You did at the cause of Harassment and bad behavior in fandoms,
NEXT TOPIC
3. Make The Business Makes Sense & epilogue
THE OWL HOUSE
Dana Terrace has the makings of doing good shows however when it comes down to an audience to kid she has some major damage control on how the fandom will come across,
i mean have we not learned from the Lilith and Camilla toxic issues, you can tell the show likes to demonize the adults which is unacceptable, and can damage storytelling and characters.
the truth i feel there needs to be proper staff on how to write POC, ethnic and cultural representation In the show, Amphibia, Molly mcgee, Haileys on it and other break-out shows did it better,
hell even Amphibia doing those cuisines food culture in Frogworld, can you imagine the boiling isles taking on Hispanic cuisine.
Which i felt could've hit a mark on luz home life and culture if written & fleshed out,
Like the staff didn't know how to write those topics, they've coulda gone so far with it but unfortunately fall flat in that area,, not to mention the fashion. UGH
sigh.
ViVI WORKS ( i try not to make this quick but i can discuss more on comments be NICE)
Vivienne Medrano has good fashion and business sense
its important to have that cause having a Cloud Nine franchise coming from nothing can do wonders for how you are perceived as an artist,
The discourse has come due to her take on the controversy on platforms talking on her many harsh topics
(in my opinions she too needs to work on controlling scenarios & damage control that can affect her
So tried but yeah
vivi is a dominant artist who takes her business seriously so I am glad to have her flourish in Spindlehorse,
but just i wish i cant help but fall outta love with her work, knowing of the problems in today's animation comesacross how you say even snowflakes can break under if heard by there favorite creators.
lets be honest these two can learn from each other. and vivi does sure know angles and promoting
youtube
very glad to get this written so I put some thought into this
i wish nothing for the best for these awesome artists and creators thank you all for coming so far and have a wonderful voyage thanks.
#ask kyoko cane#daystar voyage#toh#toh critic#toh critical#toh criticism#helluva boss#hazbin hotel#blitzo#stolas#loona#moxxie#vivziepop#vivienne medrano#helluva millie#millie#stella#octavia goetia#dana terrace#luz noceda#lumity#huntlow#fandom critic#helluvaverse#hazbin alastor#charlie morningstar#vaggie#angel dust#husk#the owl house critic
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In regard to my last reblog, I kinda want to expand on it.
The novels are 100% optional flavour text. They aren't required for you to really understand what is happening in the world. With the exception of Asunder, that one for me is a bit of a grey area but that is only because it covers aspects of two companions (Cole and Vivienne) that are glossed over and is rehashed entirely in an aspect by another companion's personal quest (Cassandra's).
Not even World of Thedas, the lore books are required because a big chunk of them are put in the game as codices. And the character stuff that's not? That's also flavour text and the fact that Leliana doesn't share background reports on your companions or you can't find them is a missed opportunity in utilizing Leliana. The whole "Game" aspect of Orlesian politics could have also been better incorporated through Josephine and Vivienne.
This is long so... cut.
But TLDR: Nothing is mandatory. World of Thedas, Asunder, and Masked Empire are just under utilized flavour text. They better not do the same or worse with Tevinter Nights.
We know they cut Cole from having Evangelina and Rhys appear for his personal quest and instead we got that weird thing with Varric and Solas being disagreeing dads on nature vs nurture. Rhys and Evangeline, but more so Rhys, are so important to Cole's background that I feel they could have brought them on with a little codex or preamble and it would have worked fine. They could have touched more on Cole's fear of becoming a demon again, his sense of identity and self, and even explored his whole concept of "helping" and his unique brand of compassion - because really Cole's form of compassion is a little off the beaten path.
But, that isn't because Asunder is mandatory, but because Cole isn't well anchored to begin with. They don't really explore him as a spirit/demon, they mostly use him as a way to tell you about other characters, and he's really wishy washy on even establishing what happened at the White Spire or with Seeker Lambert and just gives these sort of teasing/tantalizing starting points.
Which leads into a weak point with Vivienne. She has issue with how the war started. She has issue with the vote. She has issue with everything that happened with the White Spire. Which again, isn't explored and is just flippantly mentioned in banter with Cole or when she's snarking at Fiona.
We know she has issue with the vote because it was made when everyone was already dealing with Circles falling and templars killing people and extremist mages were killing other mages that opposed them. The vote was made not by people who were elected by the Circles - not entirely. They were made by whoever happened to get to Andoral's Reach and it was very much an emergency vote. She wasn't there for the vote and that's the start of the issue for her. Which, understandably this was written before Vivienne even existed, but with that they never resolve why she wasn't there for the vote or even aware of the chaos of the Circles. You kind of guess it's because of Bastien's health but yeah not really clear.
Both Cole and Vivienne's stories would be better anchored as well as give the Mage Templar war and the factions with in it more nuance if they even tried to incorporate the cliff notes of Asunder. It would also make it more of a flavour text and less of this murky grey area.
Which to make it even more murky and grey, Cassandra's whole plot of discovering the reversal to tranquility? Yeah that was discovered by a tranquil mage at the request of Divine Justinia. Literally every circle mage and Chantry person (of a certain rank) knows of its existence. Which they cheekily hide in ambient dialogue between Mother Giselle and another cameo character from Cassandra's past, Avexis. An elven mage who was turned tranquil because of the danger from her abilities to not only control small creatures but dragons.
That story Cassandra is known for? The dragons attacking the Grand Cathedral? Avexis was involved with that. Whole big thing in Dawn of the Seeker. But I digress.
Mother Giselle and Avexis talk about the reversal to tranquility in Haven. Everyone already knows but Cassandra's personal quest misleads you cause she's so pikachu-faced about discovering that there was a reversal and the Seeker's knew about it. Only half of the information should be new to her, the rest everyone knew about for a year and could have been beautifully folded into her story as to not only her mixed feelings on how she didn't feel as close to Justinia as Leliana was - because Leliana was in on it and Cassandra wasn't even aware that the Divine requested this happen behind the Seeker's back in 9:35 Dragon.
It would have been a great point to fold into the story to not only give more context to Cassandra questioning the Order but also feeling out of control and lost. Honesty would have been a good point in tension for her and Leliana to have.
But instead Cole goes largely explained, Vivienne is under explored and barely connected to the Mage Templar War conflict, and Cassandra is a (in my opinion) much less interesting rehash of something most people connected to the Chantry and Circles already knew for the most part.
Asunder is less required reading and more of discarded world building that amounts to a lot of missed opportunities.
Something I think that Tevinter Nights is at risk of if not worse. Either under utilized world building or they go full tilt in the wrong direction and it becomes the first required reading.
Specifically reading, because the first required additional media is the Legacy DLC of which they yoinked Corypheus and the whole start of the red templars from. And then again with Tresspasser which establishes and reveals so much vital information for the next game. Both DLCs, I think should have/be updated to free. Especially since it's been so long and they are required for the story now. And any "well players had to pay for them previously" is bs because new players can get the whole trilogy on sale for like 15USD. Deluxe editions included so they come with the DLCs - except for DA2.
Asunder and DLCs aside, lemme now circle back to the whole World of Thedas/Leliana and co thing.
The thing that grinds my gears about the World of Thedas bits is that a large part of them... are written to Leliana as reports. In game Leliana talks about doing background checks - how she isn't thorough enough with Solas because there wasn't enough time and more pressing things were coming. He slipped through the cracks. But everyone else? She got dirt on. Sera included. Leliana could have been a great vector to not only divulge more flavour text lore of our companions, but it could have also given us more aspects of conversation. How do they feel knowing Leliana gave us reports? Is sera annoyed because of the questions you can now ask? Is Blackwall sweaty because you might know details he doesn't? Does Iron Bull want to compare notes and see how good Leliana's network is?
There was so much they could have done with Leliana to not only make her more involved but made us more involved with the characters. It would have lead to more interactive story telling and folded in making the meta knowledge less meta as our Inquisitor actually used the resources of our spymaster.
Still, not required reading, but a way to fold in all the world building you've done to make the characters feel more real and give us a chance to bond with them. Even if we can't talk to them about it because "leaving it open ended for headcanons".
This also goes into how "The Game" is under utilized in Inquisition. So much of Inquisition is telling vs showing us or letting us experience something. Having more scenes where we walk in on Josephine dealing with combative knowledge, using our origins and background perks to play the game introduces us to the concept of Orlesian politics and perhaps we get perks - more soldiers, resources, gold, higher starting approval at the Winter Palace. Something that has more relevance to us and folds in this supposed system all of Orlais is beholden to.
A similar system could have also been used with Vivienne. Whether she was hosting nobles or if she wanted to gossip with you over a letter she received that she thinks could be of use to you if you know how to properly use The Game. It would have also been interesting if it impacted the noble npcs hanging out in the hall, if it became weighted depending on just how good you were. Less Orlesians meaning less support from Orlais and more reliance on other nations to legitimize the Inquisition. More Orlesians? A stronger army, more standing with the court and the Chantry, more ammunition for when you're dealing with Celene and Gaspard in the Winter Palace. Things like that. Simple story threads that didn't really need to go anywhere but perhaps impacted the ambient state.
It would have helped tie in Masked Empire and give it more weight (and also make Michel de Chevin be more than the rando the Imshael maybe killed).
Just saying... It's just under utilized world building in an interactive media.
#Archi is yelling#dragon age#bioware critical#bioware writing critical#dragon age inquisition#dai#asunder#world of thedas#the masked empire#tevinter nights#cole#vivienne#madam de fer#leliana#josephine#long post
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loved your post about the dalish because its the same way ive felt these 10 years, but u forgot something that i think itâs important: they revealed the reason why the exalted march of the dales happened (red crossing) and tried to make it a âboth sides are wrongâ when the dalish where the ones getting genocided basically. and u can even give the new info to the chantry. and ameridan. also the ameridan reveal and him being a believer in the creators and also andrastian was so weird to me⌠it felt like bioware telling me âsee! be reasonable like ameridan both these cultures (where one of them get brutally abused by the other) can coexistâ
MY GOD YEAH honestly i didnt mention that bc i have a post i wanna write at some point about how for like all of the marginalised groups in da they frame it as a "they deserved it" sort of things - the exalted marches against the dalish is because they "deserved it" by "attacking first", the mages "deserved it" because theyre "dangerous" and because "they started the blight". and you see it so often ESPECIALLY in da2 where meredith's paranoid ramblings are ALWAYS proven right: There ARE underground groups of blood mages who are conspiring not just against her but against you (hawke) and even planning to sacrifice your sibling/one of your friends. the writing wants you to believe that mages ARE more likely to turn to blood magic than not. the writing wants you to believe that only weak mages turn to blood magic. etc. and it's the same with like literally every victim of oppression ever in not just dragon age but like bioware games in general (looks at the krogan. looks at the camera. im not enough of a mass effect nerd to speak too long about its lore but. stares at the krogan specifically.). it's genuinely so fucking STRANGE like bioware is so horny for giving us a "reason" why groups are oppressed and making the only marginalised characters it consider sensical and worthy of attention fucking centrists and boot lickers (vivienne...........................................)
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JJK Characters With A Fashionista S/O
đđ¤ Ý Only doing a few characters that I like. If this isnât a bust Iâll do more (donât ask me where this came from, I need to write).
MINORS
Itadori Yuuji
Yuuji isnât too big on fashion, he just wears what he thinks looks nice but heâll compliment your outfits and even try to match with you once in while (with whatever clothes he has).
He finds it silly how expensive the fashion industry and fashion itself is. âTheyâre just clothesâŚâ then Yuuji will direct you to websites like SHEIN, not knowing any better and being sucked in by the cheap prices and nice looking clothes.
Once you inform him of SHEINâs lore he feels ashamed and doesnât pay much attention to the expensive purchases.
Now one thing he likes about being with you is how up to date you are with everything fashion related. More specifically, the fashion shows.
He thoroughly enjoys the ridiculous, avant-garde shows the most.
Fushiguro Megumi
Megumiâs the most excited about your love for fashion cause he relates. You CANNOT tell me he isnât a fashion nerd (projection but itâs also true :3). He thinks youâre UBER cool and is so glad heâs dating you.
He loves seeing your different outfits for the day, heâll sprinkle compliments but sometimes he feels the usual âYour outfits looks nice.â doesnât cut it, so he doesnât compliment it directly.
What does he do? Be sneaky (obvious) with it. If youâre wearing Vivienne Westwood for example: âVivienne Westwoodâs a cool brand. I, personally, think that anyone who wears it has amazing taste in fashionâŚjust saying.â Same goes for whatever else you may be wearing.
Heâs SUCH a fashion nerd, oh my days. If you give him the chance heâll bust out his big book of fashion and will romance/do his best to impress you with it. âI heard you talking about the fashion of the Edo period, so I did some research on it (nerd emoji).â
MAJORS
Gojo Satoru
This goon takes your love for fashion as an insult. âMy closetâs better than yours, donât play with me.â Heâll sneakily try to one up you, and if he fails heâll be pissy about it.
I mean this seriously. Heâll take pics of your and his outfits, post them online with a poll, and wait patiently for the results.
Gojo is supportive though, fear not! He takes a stupid amount of pics of you and posts them everywhere. He posted you on a billboard once: âDo you like it? I asked for extra resolution so they could get all the detail in your shoes!â When he posts you on his socials for the outfit comparisons he blocks anyone who leaves even the SLIGHTEST negative comment about you.
He brags about you all the time.
Nanami Kento
A stylish man who knows a thing or two about the latest trends! Introducing Nanami to styles outside of his comfort zone isnât too difficult. Heâs usually really invested in the varying styles and if youâre convincing enough heâll try them a few times.
He loves âDevil Wears Pradaâ and rewatches it all the time. That movie is like cocomelon is to kids for him; his eyes are GLUED onto the screen.
Remove the movie and heâll toss you out.
If Nanami hears you talk about some new clothes you want expect them to be shipped the next day. He is not one to play when it comes to your appearance, especially since you care about it so much.
Being around you makes him wonder if he should change his closet (a bit).
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ok so here they go my dragon age 4 opinions but i havent even recruited davrin yet, so spoilers of that
for now the bad are worse than i thought (the lore) but also the good is better than i expected (scout lace harding my beloved)
so the good:
-scout harding my beloved is the cutest thing ever i die. also she is giving me dwarf lore blessed
-i really like walking around in the cities thats so nice, and i like that you can give money to street performers and people asking for money. one shopkeeper told me his grandpa was a dwarf it was so cute
-i love decoratiiiiing and i wanna get all the decortations and clothes. i also like the scene with your chara talking about their opinions on things while decorating
-the fights are fun to play!!! this is a first for me in dragon age lmao
-for now i do like the companions i love harding and i like neve bellara and lucanis and i do wanna get the rest
-maevaris was the one cameo that i was like !!!o mg !!!!!!!!!!!
-im a weak girl i get missions just to hang out walking with the companions and im like HELL YEAAAAH
the bad:
-da grey morality wasnt perfect but in here is like all the allies are mega GoodyGood and all the enemies whole personality is Being Evil. cmon. i hope im wrong later tho
-these people get along too well (person whose teams were always alistair/morrigan anders/fenris sera/vivienne). i need more blood pls. a lil bit. like it could be refreshing and i love friendship but its just feel a bit forced idk
-i love the qunaris and i always been very interested in the qun and stuff, and i guess cause these are the antaam only but like?? they made them so boring they are just brute force conquerors. give me the cool lore of this pls i miss the arishok T-T but i fear they are just not gonna give a fuck about them
-i miss having casual convers with people asking about their culture and shit... now every conver is a cutscene so i cant ask stupid shit about their opinions...
-im waiting still for them to explain how the fuck the veil jumpers formed and how all this is affecting the dalish, but its like you tell them "hey your gods are back and are evil" and everyone is like "ah ok" and believe you instant?? TOT (except the grey warden boss the only normal reaction in the whole game) but like i wanted to see how this impacted the dalish people??? pls show me?? pls bellara tell me how you became a veil jumper why do you know so much????
-sometimes when i load the game my dwarf looks like the default one instead of mine T_T its annoying
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Hazbin Hotel - Rewatch Thoughts (Episode 1, Part 1)
Notes: As Iâve been re-reading some of my favorite things (as in, not necessarily just fanfics, but other stuff that I enjoy) I got part of the way through @canary3d-obsessedâs âRestless Rewatch: The Untamedâ and thought to myself that I should do one of these for Hazbin Hotel! I canât do a first time reacting to, because by this point Iâve watched it a good eight times -_- But this way I can point out some of the things that Iâve noticed on multiple rewatches, some of which prove just how clever the team behind this show is! Also, you will get unapologetic Huskerdust shipping. This is just my life now.
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Episode 1
So we start off with Charlie giving us the background story on Heaven, Hell, daddy Lucy, mama Lili, and all of that. Heaven was âgood,â Lucifer was a dreamer who thought of free will, the elders of Heaven said ânah,â Lucifer said âbut what if yea,â and shit went sideways.
As someone who likes watching reaction videos on YouTube, Iâve been surprised by the number of people who have watched this intro and gone âWhoâs Lilith?â And then there are the ones who say they heard about her from Diablo 4. I feel like Lilith isnât⌠rare lore? I donât know where or when I first heard about Lilith, but that kind of supports my stance of surprise?
(I tried to show my religious friend Hazbin â leaning on the âitâs about redemptionâ point â and it was actually the mention of Lilith that first triggered her? Because âyou have to get really deep into things to find out about Lilithâ? I am confused.)
I wonât go into my theories too heavily at this point â Iâll put up a final chapter for those so I can take it down in humiliation when the show laughs in my face later â but Eve looks very, very evil when she gets that fruitâŚ
Anyway, Luci and Lili got exiled, Luci developed depression, Lili developed magic song powers then fluffed off seven years ago. Donât worry, Charlie â your mom just went to go get some milk and cigarettes.
Genuinely, is Lilith being a song demon why everyone in Hell has pre-choreographed musical numbers? If she âempowered demon-kindâ with her songs, does that include giving them all baby song powers? We know that these songs arenât reality breaks because at the end of âLoser, Babyâ the sharks comment on the song. (Thereâs also Vaggie and Angelâs discussion in âHappy Day in Hellâ but since thatâs in-song it feels like a less-strong argument.)Â
So it turns out that Charlie has been speaking this whole prolog bit aloud to herself. Relatable, girl â me dictating to myself the entire course of actions it takes to get through my email inbox. My officemate wears headphones so she wonât think Iâm talking to her when I start talking to myself.
Also, poof â kitty!Â
I love KeeKee (pronounced âkey-keyâ because, and this is true, sheâs a key). But I also donât know what the point of KeeKee is? If itâs just to give Charlie a pet, thatâs totally fine. She also has Razzle and Dazzle, but Charlie could be one of those people with two cats, a full fishtank, a canary, and a husky and thatâs totally chill.
(Why yes, my in-lawsâ place is a zoo, why do you ask?)
I think I saw somewhere that KeeKee is the key to the hotel? But when Lucifer pops up later he immediately coos over KeeKee like Charlie has had her forever, so she obviously didnât come with the hotel. Did Charlie change the locks on the hotel to KeeKee-compatible locks after she bought the place? I assume this is a metaphorical key?Â
(Lucifer and KeeKee in episode 5.)
Vivienne has said that KeeKee is a âphysical manifestation of the hotelâ but even that doesnât make a lot of sense with the timelineâŚÂ *Shrugs*
Charlie and Vaggie talk, and I honestly get so much amusement out of people who are like âIs that her sister? Are they best friends?â And I know that they didnât, like, make out in their opening scene. But I didnât ever suspect that they werenât girlfriends? Maybe itâs just because I read into pretty much all media from a queer lens.
(Right here, maâam.)
Charlie will go on to call Vaggie her girlfriend much later in episode 5 and make it official-official, but if you donât go into everything with a straight-is-default mindset Iâm not sure how you miss it.
We blip into Alastorâs take on a commercial for a hotel. Which is thoroughly enticing to exactly⌠Alastor.
(Quick question on the sinner designs â and I wonât stop every time we see a cluster of sinners to do this. But everyoneâs design has something to do with how they lived or died, right? Angel is from a âweb of crimeâ family, Husk is an unlucky black cat [I know, heâs a tuxedo cat not a fully black cat], Alastor was shot by a hunter like a deer⌠was grenade man some type of bomber? A war criminal? What is his story???)
His little hand-drawn picture is kind of cute, but it also makes me laugh because we actually see another character do something similar later on: Vox!
(And, yeah, Charlie obviously.)
I want someone to write the fic where Alastor and Voxâs relationship started in an introductory art class before descending into the chaos we see in episodes 2 and 8.
Vaggie does not like Alastorâs sense of humor and starts yelling at him. Charlie tries the *kindergarten teacher* nice feedback. âI love your use of color,â she says, staring at his construction paper covered in scribbled blobs of blue and orange. âVery creative.â
(âMaybe if you crumpled your drawing into a little ball like this, it would look better in the trashcan, honey!â)
Alastor doesnât see the problem here. Alastor seems to have exactly zero capacity to accept anything that isnât Alastorâs way, so this is unsurprising.
And then, with the sultry wail of a saxophone, weâre introduced to the bestest spider (and the only spider this horrifically arachnophobia author actually adores:) Angel Dust
Angel is totally willing to shoot an amateur porno right there on the sofa if it will help draw sinners to the hotel for Charlie.
And this would actually probably work in Hell, honestly. The horniest sinners actually would be knocking the walls down if they thought that with every nightâs stay you got a free round with Hellâs most famous porn star. âCum to the Hazbin Hotel for some âquality timeâ with our singular resident.â
I am curious what Angelâs concept for his porno commercial was. Just him and Alastor banging dirty on the coffee table in the foyer? Night in the life of the brothel that is Angelâs bedroom?
(Also, I know Val owns Angel in the studio and Angel has some freedom outside of it, but does that include shooting his own pornos? Is it okay if theyâre not for money? Or is it still not okay because Angel doesnât own rights to his own image? Would Angel have to charge so Val could get his cut?)
Charlie doesnât want to exploit Angel that way, but Angel starts listing off all of his highly exploitable attributes. He lists the legs twice, which is hilarious, but Iâm immediately zeroed in on âthe gag reflex.âÂ
Youâd think that for someone who makes a significant amount of his living sucking dick that it should be âthe lack of a gag reflexâ but the thing about Angel is that heâs not exactly sucking dick for the nicest guys around. Honestly, the fact that he does have a gag reflex and therefore will be gagging and choking and drooling is probably a turn-on for his usual partners.
Weâre interrupted from Angel attempting to âkeep going all night, baby,â by Lucifer calling, and the fact that his contact image in Charlieâs phone is a rubber duck in Luciferâs top hat is honestly too cute?
Angel wants to know why Alastor canât just make people stay in the hotel. And the timing on this animation is actually a little weird. After he says that he can, Husk chimes in with âWhy do you think Iâm here?â but Alastor is already moving to see around Vaggie as Husk starts talking. Has he primed Husk to be his hype man if someone starts asking questions like this?
Here's Alastor, looking at Husk before Angel and Vaggie even turn their heads â and Alastor had to move his whole *torso* to see around Vaggie.
A: âNow, remember. If anyone starts asking if Iâm big and bad, you say yes.â
H: âSure, Alastor.â
A: âI mean, Iâll say so first. But then you jump in and talk me up.â
H: âYeah, all right.â
A: âBut, like, right away.â
H: âUh-huh.â
A: âShould we practice? We should practice.â
I do find it funny that we know the timeline â Alastor, Husk, and Niffty have been at the hotel a week per Vaggieâs words earlier. But Husk is already grousing about them bitching and moaning all the time. Itâs been seven days?! How much bitching and moaning are you guys doing?! And itâs not just listening to, like, Angel bitch and moan. Itâs âyou fucks.âÂ
(Or âyou fuckâsâ because Amazon doesnât know how to pluralize a swear word?)Â
Vaggie didnât even want a bar, but Iâm betting it took her about two piscos on the rocks to be over that.
We also get our official series intro to Niffty here when she says âI like being forced!â in her happy little voice with a wide smile.Â
(God, I want the Niffty episode.)
Angel starts hitting on Husk, but (YMMV) I feel like at this point Angel isnât trampling all over Huskâs boundaries the way he does later. Heâs just throwing passes and Husk is kind of engaging him? By responding? He threatens Angel, making it clear that the flirting is unwelcome, absolutely.Â
But I kind of want to see where the conversation would have gone if Vaggie hadnât stepped in. At some point it might have gotten snappier, but Angel wasnât in meltdown mode like he is in âMasqueradeâ so they probably could have kept bickering for a bit.
Vaggie and Angel start talking about the core premise of the show. Is Hell the end of the road? Maybe, but also maybe not. Charlie thinks that itâs worth trying so thatâs what Vaggie is going to do.
We as rewatchers know that where you end up in the afterlife isnât as permanent of an assignment as the show makes it sound. And Vaggie Iâm sure highly suspects so as well. This conversation is literally happening with one person who was in Heaven and now lives in Hell.
Though I do have to wonder if thereâs a teeny tiny part of Vaggie that hopes the hotel fails, though? If Sinners really can be redeemed into Heaven, then she has to double/triple/quadruple think about what sheâs done as an Exorcist. If the Sinners prove irredeemable, it doesnât *justify* what she did or anything, but it could potentially relieve some of the guilt for her.
(Blake Romanâs delivery on âcrack is expensiveâ is my favorite moment from episode 1.)
If we didnât know that Charlie was drowning in daddy issues, I feel like we get a good demonstration at the end of her phone call. Yes, sheâs excited and happy and hopeful. But she also says âOkayâ and hangs up.Â
Maybe Lucifer said, âIâll talk to you soonâ or something and she said âokayâ back. But I never hang up after a call with my dad without a âlove you, bye.â
IDK why Charlie calls Vaggie over except to show her hyperactive squirrel brain going wild. Alastor and Angel are staring at them and seem like they can hear every word even after Charlie had Vaggie come around the corner.
Vaggie knows that Charlie means Adam, right? She has to. Charlie says âthe leader of the angel armyâ and as of now, I mean⌠thatâs Adam.
Also, initially I missed the detail that Adam was the one to call the meeting.Â
Was he going to inform Lucifer face-to-(virtual)-face that they were moving up the next extermination? Do Lucifer and Adam meet regularly? I think not from some of the dialogue in episode 8, but then what is the Heaven Embassy for?
(We'll pick up in Episode 1, Part 2 due to Tumblr's 30 images-per-post limit.)
#hazbin hotel#recap#images#randomness#musings#meta#analysis#charlie morningstar#vaggie#angel dust#husk#alastor#niffty#adam#lute
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PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME ABOUT YOUR FANKIDS THEY ARE SO CUTE.... do they have unique magic?? what are their family dynamics (with their parents, grandparents, etc.)???
AH OKAY SOOO- I have quite a few (Iâll tag them all so you can scroll through their tags- despite not having an organized blog I do have it organized for them) BUT I shall focus on Nami, Enzi, Faraja and Viv because. Iâm in a mood for my girls rn-/lh
Nami is an only child, spoiled to hell and back by Azul because look at that man. He was made to be a girl dad spoiling them. She can do no wrong to them and they will defend her and her actions until the end of time. BUT she is the more generous kind of spoiled (if she likes you. If she doesnât then get slapped by octopus tentacle motherfucker-) where she will give you something like that because sheâd always just get another one
sheâs the only one to have a fully thought out um (because god why do they take so much brainpower to think of)- Sirens Song. If she wills it, she can use her voice as a tool of mass hypnotism. This ability goes as far as her voice does, so as long as you are in earshot of her voice, you are susceptible. (Which sucks for beastmen with good hearing)
in general though she is very close with both of her dads and admires both of them to an absurd degree. She wants to be just like them, if not better. She is ADORED on Azulâs side (because in my lore, octo babies are RARE. You will only ever probably have one, or maybe two if you are insanely lucky. It ties into their magical prowess) but on Jamilâs side itâs basically just Najma and Jaddah, but she barely sees her (in my lore Jamilâs mom isnât a bad person, she just was stuck in a bad situation and was very mentally unwell. Jamil and Najma were both ripped from her arms right after she gave birth and it messed her up. Jamil let her hold baby Nami and she cried)
(Design wise she pulls from Ariel and Vanessa. And a bit of jasmine)
Enzi is also technically an only child, but itâs only ever been her and ruggie. She was quite literally plucked off of the street and sheâs been with him ever since. She grew up side by side with Faraja, constantly having play dates and such. But overall, she just, loves her dad. Theyâre a lot more like friends then a normal parent kid dynamic because ruggie understands that as she gets older she wants more respect (and hyena gender roles come in a bit). He taught her things from his culture though (HISPANIC RUGGIEEEE-) and she is fully considered apart of their community. Even if sheâs a grey hyena in a sea of blonde and brown.
Faraja is⌠oh god she is my angst baby. Iâm so sorry girl- she is an only child as well. I swear I didnât mean for this to happen- her other parent.. isnât in the picture. One day she was at Leonaâs doorstep with a note saying she was his, and a week later, after the tests went through, she was. Cursed with being a bastard in a royal family (despite how fucking upset about it Leona was and how much he fought her treatment) she was basically ostracized from the rest of the family except for farenaâs wife and Cheka. Leona loves her though. She never got a royal budget so he works as a local magical history professor and gives her his budget instead. Her hair is used throughout her storyline to express her feelings and I have a post detailing some of her angst
Vivienne is Not an only child, she has her brother, Emil- and sheâs a musician (a la Taylor swift- said somewhat jokingly) but she only started performed when she was 16, because Vil was absolutely not going to have her have the same childhood he did. Instead she was tossed over to rook and taken out hunting. She has a crossbow in her skirt enchanted to compress at all times. Sheâs close with her little brother (tho he is annoying. Like all siblings) and sheâs pretty close with both of her parents. (She also loves her gf Faraja which was a uh. Shock for Vil, at first.)
#AUAGH OKAY#Faraja kingscholar#Nami ashengrotto#vivienne schoenheit#Emil schoenheit#Enzi bucchi#Malick draconia#Mallerie draconia#Neo shroud#Ellie felmier#Samir Al asim#Tamaki leech#There is also my florid twins but they are uh. UNNAMED
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Extending the same level of courtesy: 9, 12 and 22 for dragon age
Sorry about the delay, I started to think about my answers and promptly went insane. Then the trailers for DA4 droped and despite having 150 grievances and 236 fears - or maybe because -I went insane some more. I did get a few somewhat coherent thoughts out, though !
9. worst part of canon
So I typed like half a LibreOffice page on why the way Inquisition deals with the mage/templar conflict was an incredible example of setting things up for almost no payoff, and then I went on a tangent about my frustrations with how Orlais in general is written, and then half another LibreOffice page on the fact that so much of canon is in supplementary material and how that does negatively impact my enjoyement of the games, with a long parenthesis on how Alistair being a half-elf makes the lore actively worse, all the while taking numerous breaks because I was not being normal about all of this and I wanted to be normal about all this, but clearly I cannot be normal, about any of this. Anyway, worst part of canon is still the use of the term Tranquil Solution in DA2. Pretty sure we already talked about that but it's just. It's so bad. Why.
12. the unpopular character that you actually like and why more people should like them
Well, as you pointed out this fandom is big enough and discoursey enough for pretty much all characters to have their ardant defensers - which is actually a good thing I think. I also think that the nature of the games necessarily means that a playthrough can never cover every aspect of a character and that you might easily miss an interaction that could nuance or improve your opinion of them. Vivienne is kind, warm and extremely straightforward with her goals if you take the time to befriend her. I didn't like Blackwall in my first playthrough, and never brought him anywhere, but his romance turned out to be my favourite of all Inquisition. It's pretty obvious Fenris and Sebastian don't fear all mages if you have Bethany in your party. If you don't blame Aveline for your mother's death, she gives you a speech on grief that I personaly find deeply touching. Sten often approves having his views challenged. Oghren is not just a walking crude joke, if you try to view his character with just a bit more grace, etc. So rather than pick one character people should like more I'll just say that if someone ever replays the games, they should try to put aside everything that annoyed them about whichever character they dislike the most and spend some time interracting with them with fresh eyes. It's often worth it. (I did write a love letter to Aveline, though)
22. your favorite par of canon that everyone else ignores
DWARVEN SOCIETIES. okay, i'm exagerating a bit. Idk that it's my absolute favrite part, and I know the dwarven lore is enjoyed by at least 20 people worldwide. But the fandom as a whole does not seem to care about the dwarves, except to ask if Varric is fuckable (no judgement, I get it). But there is so much there! Their rigid cast system and conservatism that are fucking everyone up, their disconect from the fade/lack of dream (and yet they can be made to dream, as shown by a dwarven warden or inquisitor), how that helps them handling lyrium but only to a point, their especially high resistance to the taint because of their proximity with the Darkspawn, their proximity with the Darkspawn, THE LEGION OF THE DEAD, the paragons and the Stone, the Titans, Sandal? And surface dwarves are also deeply compelling. Cut from their roots, otherized by what everyone else around them insist on calling "their people". When Varric tells a story of his brother blowing up at him for breaking a plate and ends with something like "that plate was the whole city of Orzammar to him", does that get to no one else? just me?
Chose violence ask game (I did not particularly chose violence)
#I also think people who dislike sera are often just plain wrong but like. they do they or whatever#dragon age
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okay. episode 1 thoughts.
animation is gorgeous. with all the horror stories i've heard about the production of this show, it's hard to fully enjoy but it's nonetheless really impressive.
that said. it's waaaayy to bouncy and overanimated, no one has any weight. it feels like i could snap their limbs open with my bare hands and suck the meat from it like a crab.
the main character designs range from meh to flat out bad. i'm not gonna pretend im a good artist, designer, or animator lol but i do enough to say that the similar palettes make this a nightmare as an ensemble show. everyone bleeds together, the environments bleed into characters. the only standout ones are the ones you can tell weren't designed by vivienne.
no consistency, exterminators have the same horns as imps. adam looking like an imp makes no sense in context. it's just a design choice the creators likes but didn't flesh out any further.
the writing is awful. as soon as the lore dump ended and the actual plot began, i could feel an evil feeling creeping into me as if i had opened some sort of evil book.
angel dust's dialogue is pretty much only sex jokes and/or sexual harassment, specifically against the ugly cat. the va is doing a bad impression of the original one.
other va's are fine, but keith david's voice is so jarring to hear out of that skinny fucking cat, it doesn't work. i also know stephanie beatriz can act AND do the monotone voice, i know she can sing too! so im pinning this on the voice direction because clearly something is not being communicated. she's not working as vaggie.
why is the only lesbian named vaggie? can i kill myself?
swearing has become white noise, it's every other sentence. it's so lazy. why is charlie swearing if she's a disney princess? why is adam swearing? adam being a detectable dickhead is fine but the only way the writers seemed to want to convey this is through swearing and vulgarity, it feels cheap and lazy. why not go for the condescending holier-than-thou attitude? give me a bev fucking keane, someone who uses their faith as a way to put down others and keep themselves on a pedestal.
alastor and angel dust are shaping up to be my least favorites. insufferable writing, the way you can smell the issues within them and know they'll never be resolved in a satisfying manner.
however....beyond the mediocre writing, poor direction, horrible designs, terrible art direction, and so on. i get why people like this show. themes of redemption, of unfair social structure, of change and yeah obviously it already had a fanbase pre attached. but i feel like i can see the glimmer of potential that a lot of people attached themselves to.
but also this thing is a mantis? a fucking mantis? do you hate me specifically?
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What Pride had Wrought Pt. 14
The Well of Sorrows
What Pride had Wrought Masterpost First: Speaking With Morrigan First: Meeting Kieran Previous: Abelas
Morrigan and the PC look over the Well of Sorrows and at the eluvian on the other side.
Morrigan: Youâll note the intact eluvian. I was correct on that count, at least.
PC: Is it still a threat? Can Corypheus use it to travel the Fade?
Morrigan: You recall when I took you through my eluvian, I said each required a key? The Well is the key. Take its power, and Mythalâs last eluvian will be no more use to Corypheus than glass. I did not expect the Well to feel so⌠hungry.
Dialogue options:
General: Be careful. [1]
General: Thatâs not good. [2]
General: Back away. Now. [3]
1 - General: Be careful. PC: Letâs not be reckless. I donât want anyone hurt.
2 - General: Thatâs not good. PC: Seems like that should be a concern. Morrigan: Knowledge begets a hunger for more.
3 - General: Back away. Now. PC: Donât go any closer, Morrigan.
Morrigan: I am willing to pay the price the Well demands. I am also the best suited to use its knowledge in your service.
Party Comments:
Solas: Or more likely, to your own ends. Morrigan: What would you know of my âends,â elf? Solas: You are a glutton drooling at the sight of a feast. You cannot be trusted. ă
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Vivienne: Do not trust her, Inquisitor. Sheâs a parasite, only here because she sensed a meal more hearty than you. Morrigan: Hm. Said by one whose only motive for joining the Inquisition was altruism. Vivienne: Is is altruism or sense not to plunge headfirst into a power you donât remotely understand? Morrigan: Why should I be refused, when the reasons to allow it are sound? ă
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Cassandra: I do not like this. She is far too eager. Morrigan: I do not hide it. To restore lost knowledge, I would risk much. Cassandra: And what would you do with it? You could be worse than Corypheus. Morrigan: So paralyze yourself for fear of what might be? I can give nothing but my word.
Morrigan: Of those present, I alone have the training to make use of this. Let me drink, Inquisitor.
4 - Dialogue options
Investigate: You alone have the training? [5]
Investigate: What about the price? [6]
General: You really want this? [7]
General: Perhaps nobody should use it. [8] +Sera approves
General: How can I trust you? [9]
5- Investigate: You alone have the training? PC (Dalish): âYou aloneâ? This is my heritage! PC (non-Dalish mage): âYou aloneâ? Youâre not the only mage here. PC (non-Dalish, non-mage): What âtrainingâ makes you so qualified? Morrigan: I have studied the oldest lore. I have delved into mysteries of which you could only dream! Can you honestly tell me there is anyone better suited?
10 - Dialogue options:
General: Solas? [11]
General: Vivienne? [12]
General: Dorian? [13]
General: Myself./Then itâs me. [14]
General: I donât know. [15]
General (after suggesting another companion): Maybe Morrigan is right. [16]
11 - General: Solas? PC: What about you, Solas? Solas: No. Do not ask me again. [back to 10] ă
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¤ 16 - General: Maybe Morrigan is right. PC: Perhaps youâre right. Morrigan: I am. You know I am. [back to 4]
6 - Investigate: What about the price? PC: Youâre not concerned about the price? âBound forever to the will of Mythalâ? Morrigan: Bound to the will of a dead god? It seems an empty warning. Perhaps a compulsion yet remains. Who can say otherwise? I do not fear it, even so. [back to 4]
7 - General: You really want this? PC: Are you sure you want this, Morrigan? We donât know what will happen. Morrigan: We do not, and yet it must be done. I am ready.
8 - General: Perhaps nobody should use it. PC: I hate to say it, but Abelasâs plan to destroy the Well may be the best one. Morrigan: What happens when Corypheus comes for you again? He is immortal. The wisdom of the Well may include a way to destroy him. Give me this, and I fight at your side. I shall be your sword.
9 - General: How can I trust you? PC: Whatâs to stop you from taking the knowledge and leaving? Morrigan: My word. If that seems insufficient, Corypheus threatens allâeven myself. He must be stopped. PC: And who stops you? Morrigan: I, Inquisitor, seek neither immortality nor your life.
17 - Scene continues.
18 - Dialogue options:
What does everyone else think? [19]
Arcane: I know the Wellâs danger. [20]
Morrigan, the Well is yours. (Morrigan will gain the power of the Well.) [21] -Vivienne Greatly Disapproves -Cassandra Disapproves -Iron Bull Disapproves +Blackwall Approves (romanced) +Solas Approves +Sera Approves
Iâll use the Well myself. (The Inquisitor will gain the power of the Well.) [22] -Sera Greatly Disapproves -Solas Disapproves -Dorian Disapproves (romanced) -Dorian Slightly Disapproves +Blackwall Approves (not romanced) +Iron Bull Approves +Cassandra Approves +Vivienne Greatly Approves
19 - General: What does everyone else think? PC: Thoughts?
Party Comments:
Solas: She is right about only one thing: we should take the power which lies in that well.
Vivienne: I would not trust the power in that well with anyone but you, my dear.
Dorian: It all seems ghoulish. Let Morrigan use it, if she wants it so much.
Dorian(romanced): I donât want to risk losing you to a well.
Varric: Youâre asking me? This is a lot of⌠weird. I barely understand how any of this works.
Cole: So many voices. They would be in your head, talking over you. You donât want them.
Sera: Itâs called the Well of Sorrows. Sorrows. No one should go in the Well of Sorrows.
Cassandra: If it is truly between you and her⌠then let her take the risk. Maker help us all.
Cassandra (romanced): I⌠do not know. If there is risk to youâŚ
Iron Bull: Any chance this Well could help us against Corypheus, I say you take it.
Blackwall: Iâd trust you with this power more than her⌠but it is not for me to decide.
Blackwall (romanced): I wonât lose you. Let the witch use the Well.
Morrigan: Enough deliberation. Give me your decision. [back to 18]
20 - Arcane: I know the Wellâs danger. PC: Looking at it, listening to it⌠thatâs not just knowledge from the ancient elven priests. Itâs their will. Morrigan: How would you know such a thing? PC: Thatâs what Abelas was telling us. The collective will of the priests puts anyone who drinks under a compulsion, a geas. Canât you feel it? Morrigan: That⌠would match the legends, but it does not tell us what the geas entails. I would still use the Well, but you are right. We must be cautious. [back to 18]
21 - General: Morrigan, the Well is yours. PC: Itâs yours.
Morrigan enters the Well and submerges herself in it. A wave rolls over the area, and the PC runs up to Morrigan laying unconscious in the empty basin.
PC: Morrigan? Are you all right?
Morrigan: Ellasin selah! Vissan⌠vissanallaâŚ
Morrigan: I⌠I am intact. There is much to sift through⌠but now we canâ
*Corypheus steps out of the temple and reaches out towards them., then begins to fly after them.
Corypheus: (Scream of rage.)
Morrigan: The eluvian!
PC: Through the mirror!
The eluvian activates, and the party rushes through, and a figure rises from the empty Well, following them. As it enters the eluvian, it deactivates and Corypheus runs into the glass. The party stumbles out of the mirror and into the storeroom back in Skyhold. Morrigan deactivates the eluvian once the PC comes through.
Morrigan: It is done.
Scene ends.
22 - General: Iâll use the Well myself. PC: If anyone is to use the Well, it will be me. Morrigan: So you will take what little knowledge you can understand, and let the rest go to waste?
Dialogue options:
General: We still need you. [23]
General: It wonât go to waste. [24]
General: The Inquisition needs this. [25]
23 - General: We still need you. PC: The Inquisition needs you. Corypheus still endangers us all. [26] ă
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26 - Scene continues.
Morrigan (the PC did not warn about the Wellâs geas): I am forever balked by those who believe they know better than I. Drink if you will, for the sake of us all. But steel your will to do it. Morrigan: (the PC warned about the Wellâs geas) Perhaps it is better this way. Do as you will with the Well of Sorrows, Inquisitor. But be careful.
The PC wades into the Well. They lift some of the water to their lips and there is a burst of light.
PC: (Cry of pain.)
The PC looks around, standing in a void of darkness with a circling haze.
Voice: Garas quenathra?
PC: âWhy am I here?â Corypheus⌠a magister wishes to rip the Veil open. I must learn how to stop him.
Voice: (Unintelligible whispers.)
Dialogue options:
General: Your aid is worth any price. PC: If you can help me vanquish Corypheus, take whatever price you wish. ă
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General: Answer me! PC: You will give me what I demand!
Voice: Vir mythalâenaste.
A sigil appears on the PC face, and everything goes dark.
Party comments:
Cassandra: Is it over? [Are they] coming around? I knew this would happen.
Cassandra (romanced): Maker, please. Donât let it end this way.
Sera: Wake up from your good decision, stupid!
Sera (romanced): [Honey Tongue/Buckles/âTeetness/Shiny/Tadwinks/Inky]? If youâre dead, Iâll kill you!
Blackwall: I knew no good would come of this!
Blackwall (romanced): My lady? Oh, Maker, let her keep breathingâŚ
Dorian: There! Our intrepid leaderâs coming round.
Dorian (romanced): Festis bei umo canavarum. If you donât come through this, I swear Iâll kill you.
Solas: There. Our Inquisitorâs waking up.
Solas (romanced): Inquisitor? Inquisitor!
Iron Bull (romanced): Hey, howâd that work out for you, kadan? You feeling good?
Varric: Breathing. Thatâs good! Letâs keep that up.
Vivienne: Inquisitor? Can you hear me?
The party approaches the PC as they they are jolted back into the Well, where they are laying in the empty basin. They stand, unsteady and waving away help.
Party comments:
Solas: How⌠do you feel?
Blackwall: How do you feel?
Dorian: Not dead! Well, thatâs a relief. So⌠good? Bad? Iâm dying to know.
Sera: So, youâve got a head full of damp whatever. Howâs that feel?
Iron Bull: That looked rough. How do you feel?
Cassandra: Inquisitor? How do you feel?
Vivienne: Warn us before you do that again, my dear. How do you feel?
Corypheus steps out of the temple and reaches out towards them., then begins to fly after them.
Corypheus: (Scream of rage.)
Morrigan: The eluvian!
PC: Through the mirror!
The eluvian activates, and the party rushes through, and a figure rises from the empty Well, following them. As it enters the eluvian, it deactivates and Corypheus runs into the glass. The party stumbles out of the mirror and into the storeroom back in Skyhold. Morrigan deactivates the eluvian once the PC comes through.
Morrigan: It is done.
Next: His Next Move - Morrigan Drank Next: His Next Move - Inquisitor Drank
#dragon age inquisition#dai transcripts#dragon age#dragon age transcripts#dragon age dialogue#dai#long post#what pride had wrought#wphw#no like#very long post
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First post, first written fic. hope you guys like it :3
Warning : Violence, Mentions of war, PTSD?
Synopsis : Protag has a nightmare and ends up accidentally nearly choking his s/o
Characters : Salem, Vivienne (ocs, will post more about them soon ! )
Angst, probably? More lore will be posted soon. This is a short one lol
When I opened my eyes in the middle of night, I expected to see the comforts of the ceiling in my home and my wife whom I thought was laying beside me. So why is it that when I opened my eyes, all I could see was a terrible past staring at me in the eyes? I struggled to move, my heart was pounding at a million miles per hour.. I thought I had gotten over this. I was getting better, wasn't I?
The sights of war surrounded me. Instead of the familiar bedroom I had always slept in, I saw the trenches of what was left of the last war. The cries and screams of soldiers on the battlefield was not a welcome sound to my ears. I clutched onto my rifle and put my back against the dirt walls of the trenches. I could only see the blood and bodies of those who were fortunate to be taken so quickly.. And the unfortunate ones who remained will have to deal with the trauma for the rest of their lives, just like me. Bullets, gunshots, everywhere, this wasn't something I wanted to return to. My legs were giving out on me as I ran through the dug in trenches. The friends I had made during my time in training now lay lifeless on the cold dirt.
Bombs, everywhere. How terrible. I pant and pant as I continue running for my life. If the gods could hear me, couldn't they just take me out and return me to a peaceful slumber? My thoughts clearly seemed to be the only thing I focused on because I ended up accidentally tripping on a small rock. The thud was audible as I struggle to get myself back up. It was hard to breathe.
â Pathetic. Just pathetic â A familiar voice could be heard from above me.
That voice.. No way.
I profusely look up to see the familiar scarred face of a man who I thought I had killed years ago. But this was a dream right?..
â Scared to look at me? Is this how you really remembered that day? â He chuckled as he looked around the environment they were in, his low voice somehow overpowering the constant noises of the firearms and explosives. The man got down on one knee in order to get closer to my level, with his hand he tightly got a hold of my chin and forced me to look up at him.
â I'm not really dead, you know. â God that stupid smirk on his face, I wanted to wipe it off so badly but how could I when he was the one taking control of this situation.. But.. He's not being genuine, right? This was just a dream after all but why couldn't I force myself awake? Why couldn't I speak? I was at a point where I was frozen, the only thing I could control were my thoughts.
â I don't care if you believe me or not. This must be a dream, right? â
He was mocking me and he seemed amused by it too. his red eyes flickering down at me with a hint of crazy in them.
â Kill me again, I dare you. â
It wasn't my first thought to kill him again.. But then my body moved on its own.. I stood up, then both of my hands moved to his neck. Why was I starting to choke him? I could tell he was entertained by the look I had on my face as I choked him. My fingers wrapping around his throat, constricting him of air.
â Good boy. â
Were his last words before suddenly, a faint voice played in the back of my head. It was calling my name.
When I recognized who it was, my eyes flung awake as I realised, infront of me.. The one who I was actually choking this entire time.. was my wife.
â Salem! Salem.. P-Please stop... â She could barely use her voice as my hands were tight around her throat. When I saw what was infront of me, I let go. My hands stayed close to my chest.. What was I thinking, choking my own wife?!
She let out a few coughs once my hands released her neck. I.. felt so guilty in this moment. That was until she looked at me with a look of concern and worry as she scooted herself towards me.
â ..Salem.. Are you alright..? â She asked, looking into my eyes.
I was such a terrible person.. She doesn't know of my past and I even tried to choke her out in my sleep.
â ..Vi.. I-I'm fine.. Just a bad dream.. â
Tears were threatening to leak out of my eyes. All it took was the look in my eyes for my wife to wrap her arms around me softly and that was the last trigger it took for myself to burst, crying and sobbing in her arms.
I had so many questions, and that dream only gave me more.
Vippe 36A - Recorded.
Author Notes :
Feel free to ask me questions about this ! I might write more about this mystery man who is haunting Salem in the near future but I might try to flesh out Salem and Vivienne (the wife) first before doing so. Uh yeah so thats ab it hope you liked this random oc thingy!!!!! ill also make an introduction post for myself and for Vippe 36A as a whole, ill reply to any questions so have that for now lolll
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